Ch3 04
Oh Hass, don’t be so melodramatic. You’re gonna be just fine. Just like all the other Guardians before you… Oh wait.
Speaking of not being able to go back, it’s time for another…
Hasera and Lark Review:
TERRA
Lark:
Terra takes place in one of those future planes we’ve seen before. There are void-traveling ships and a bunch of different ‘planets’, whatever those are, that are littered throughout the stars. It follows the story of a soldier who got stranded by his superior and finds himself grouping up with a rebellion that is trying to bring an end to a war. There’s kissing, explosions and hand-to-hand combat – Oh, and hot ‘alien’ babes.
The art is excellent. The technical work is done exceptionally well and the character designs are good. My one issue was that I had a bit of trouble in the beginning telling Agrippa from Talos or even Solus. They eye colour was my only indication because I hadn’t burned the facial markings into my mind. Luckily, as the story continued, physical appearances became more obvious – hair style changes and the like helped to separate Azatothian from another.
The pacing is great and there are a lot of times I thought something was going to happen and was pleasantly surprised when it broke from what I had originally thought was going to happen – and it wasn’t forced or even contrived, just as natural as me punching out a ghoul’s fangs.
The story is heavily based on character interactions, so I’m betting Vethu is having a better chance of controlling herself than Hass over this. Grey and Lex kissing must have sent her into some kind of coma. Dershan only knows what she’s doing in there.
Overall, Terra is a great piece of work. The lighting, sets, colour choices and character designs are pretty top notch. The story is intriguing and there is a lot of stuff that remind me of how The Order handles their Champions is a wonderful organization that treats its staff with respect, dignity and above all else, compassion! I’d tell any of you who had a bit of an action sweet tooth, or even an adventure craving to have a look. It’s worth your time.
Hasera:
THEY KISSED! I CAN’T BELIEVE IT! Lo’ani finally let them have a moment together and Grey gets all stupid about ‘duty’ and ‘fairness’. The girl’s hot for you, you hunk! Take her into your bed and – wait, is this recording? Jerza’il’s breath! I need to delete this.
Terra takes place in a future plane with void ships and pretty lights and amazing-looking people of different races. There’s a massive war going on between the Neutrals and the Azatothians. There are bad people on both sides and the rebellion in the middle, which is who we follow throughout the story.
Grey O’Shea was a ‘sniper’ for the Neutrals who survived his squad’s massacre only to be rescued by an Aztothian named Agrippa. So there’s obviously some tension there. As the story continues, you see Grey develop more towards a leadership role and more characters are introduced into the rebellion, including the incredibly sexy Alexus, who Grey is a total idiot for not sleeping with! She gave you the wink, you idiot! who is a kick-ass fighter and ‘pilot’.
The art is beautiful and the style is unique. It’s not that ‘anime’ style I hear about, but it’s its own kind of unique look. The colours are great and the sights are breath taking. Plus, there are enough characters for romance, shipping potential and intrigue! I still say the cutest couple is Agrippa and Eve.
I would recommend anyone who would dream of what it would like to be flying through the void to take a look at this story. It has everything the timeless stories has – romance, excitement, war, espionage and even betrayal! It’s unique and it’s something I wholly recommend people take time to read through the entirety of their archive!
Hasera put all of her skill points into “denial”.
Hehe that review is fantastic, thanks guys! I agree that Grey is being a bit of a punk about Lex, maybe Agrippa will talk some sense into him. He usually has to. π
As for the page, poor Hasera, to become so disillusioned so quickly must not be fun. Maybe they’ll end up getting along, but it seems like that could take some time (and a lot of patience on Hass’s part lol).
Of course it’s going to take quite a bit of time for the two of them to work out their partnership, with much drama and comedy and comic drama along the way. Otherwise, we wouldn’t have much of a story.
(If that came out sounding mean, I apologize. That really wasn’t my intention, but I’ve come to know it can be very hard to read the “tone” of internet comments.)
Oh… didn’t we mention? There’s only two pages left. Hass lets it go and the two of them fight crime together! The rest of the comic is just fart jokes and a commentary on hats.
You’re a bad liar Jim. We know you too well. The rest of the comic might be about fart jokes and hats SOME of the time, but there would have to be lots of half naked women and sexual innuendo to flesh it out properly. π Half naked women wearing the hats. Yes. I figured it out!!! π
No! My INGENIOUS PLAN! I mean… No. Of course not.
Curses, now I need t actually finish this story to throw her off!
It’s about the strategic positioning. The song “You can leave your hat on” doesn’t specify WHERE.
I’ve been reading your Terra for two years now. I agree: I very much like their assessments. Mostly Lark’s. Spot on man. π Though I agree with Hass that Eve and Agrippa are the cutest. *stuffs that icky romantic side back in the closest where she belongs* Also, Agrippa is totally a bad ass and my favorite character. Hehe. π
That’s great to hear! Agrippa seems to have a way of winning people over lol
Love the reviews.
Enjoying the story thus far too.
Can’t wait to see these two in action/antics.